In looking over my notes from last  week's conference, several things keep swimming to the surface of the  pool of things I learned.  So much so, in fact, that I feel I must share  them. 
- Eliminate 
allunnecessary words. - Don’t overuse exclamation points!
 - I was using too many was’s.
 - It’s never too early to self-promote.
 - Using too many “likes” is like the kiss of death (as is using trite expressions like “kiss of death”).
 - The first line of your story just might be the most important one.
 - A private investigator does not need a search warrant.
 - Psychopaths can be great red herrings.
 - "Good Cop/Bad Cop" isn't used in the real world of interrogation.
 - My favorite cupcake at Gigi's is watermelon.
 
"The first line of your story just might be the most important one."
ReplyDeleteOh, no. I'll have to revise it AGAIN.